Wednesday, August 19, 2009

High School Dropout

Topic : Education
Subtopic : High School Dropouts
Paragraph : Cause and Effect (in Outline)

Paragraph I (Introduction)
It has a lot of urban schools in the United States that faced with the problem, which the problem is well-known as high school dropout. There are variety of aspects toward the problem.
- Economical aspect
- Social aspect
- Environmental aspect
- Academic aspect (which commonly signified with any test scores of each subject done by the students.

Paragraph II (Main Paragraph)
-Cause I-
i) The 'Tough Standards' movement, which potentially dominated by political and corporated worlds
ii) Education and Freedom, which often done by coercive psychological system
iii) Mental Illness where people is feeling hospitalized that occur especially for the children ages 5 through 9

-Cause II-
i) People learn differently
- One's gender affects the process of learning
- Imbalance between the girls and the boys. As an example, girls did enjoy the school instead of the boys.
ii) Extreme Difficulty (especially for the man who need to maintain its relationship to women. This typical case is termed as lack of integration)

-Cause III-
Widespread effects of crisis
- Global financial crisis (affects fund raising fr high school in U.S.)
- Lack of benefits earned from local high schools around the state (According to the source of Dropout Nation)

Paragraph III (Transition Paragraph)
Leading to the point that has several aspects of these dropout cases in schools (comes with various factual data)

Paragraph IV (Main Paragraph -continued-)
-Effects I-
Mind damage towards excessive control, where it encompasses mental illness, family dysfunction, chronic stress, and other mental disorders.

-Effects II-
Educational Rules
i) Extended drills, excessive daily activities
ii) Sleep restriction
iii) Strong aversive emotional in which creates non-physical punishment, for example humiliation, loss of privilage, anxiety, personal intense guilt.

Conclusion + Solution (Concluding Paragraph)
High school dropout should definitely be banned and decreased.
Solutions
- Raising fund policy for high school children by providing more resources (since the government rule of George W. Bush)
- Contributions to schools (officially funded by Bill and Melinda Gates Foundations, called 'The Silent Epidemic')

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